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Karen Rile's avatar

Well-written, as usual! And this felt more tightly edited. I love the turn at the end of the second section (btw, it doesn't stop, but the men just get older and grosser.)

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Shelby Latterman's avatar

thank you for reading! i knew my last one would be too long so i kept it shorter this time ;)

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